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Divine Poverty Greetings

Flashlight search
for mirror reflection,
mere sepia hazes
of skewed reality.

Only upon craning my neck to the sky
did i finally find my answer -
    entwined with the shoes long devoid of laces;
      the trousers with nonexistent knees
    and the trenchcoats which soap has never loved -
all rumours of transcendancy perished.

His eye reflected myself:

i am fucking beautiful..

Author notes

“One does not meet oneself until one catches the reflection from an eye other than human.”
~ Loren Eiseley

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  • poet2angels gold member
    February 23, 2009
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    This is so unique, so magical
    filled with smile and I love it

    Lynda