what hopeless flower
grooms nectar
for a spit of honey?
what pointless brow
polishes seed
for looming sin?
you need not answer-
the knowing sun
throws flames
upon your petals
and truth into your face
your eyes turn down
to the floor
and all its' bounty
where the dreaming sisters lay
beneath the mighty stem
and all it's juice
abed,
abed again,
abed forever
and she only feels
the wind,
the curve
and the full of the moon,
wet and dripping
Author notes
she. by kevin o'connor/ui'connabhair
A contest entry
- Love goes where its sent: up a dog's ass PW's welcome by echo-ink.
700 points, ended March 1, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - FLOWER,BLOOM,BLOSSOM by Rhythm Child.
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hmmm..Very erotic and thought provoking. Thanks for entering the contest and best wishes to you!
Jul
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fantastic
"where the dreaming sisters lay" reminds me of 'nuns' lol. I found this quite an obscure piece in a sense, it's apparent meaning, in verse one, is not immediately apparent, yet, as with all good poetry it requires many readings and this piece is guaranteed to be read over and over again without any deminishing enjoyment. personally i think it is an excellent poem, and the latent sexuality within it is a joy to read -
What a beautiful piece! Stunning! Definitely worthy of the silver it received. Unfortunately, it was created on the 22nd, which is not one of the dates I was looking for. Thanks for entering my contest. It’s an honor to have you show your work here!
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This gives lots of thoughts to ponder.
Thanks for entering,
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