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I'm Not What You Wanted

I thought I could save it
Without knowing what I was trying to save

Maybe
There's part of me
That still doesn't know what it is

And none of me knows all of it

But, no
I'm
  Not
      What
      You needed
I'm not what you wanted

But, now
Am I what you need?
Am I what you want?

I don't care.

I'm sick of it;
I'm sick of you

Although part of me is still inclined
To think there's a difference between those two

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  • Angierie
    February 23
    Edit | Reply
    Very nice. Thanks so much for this..
    definitely something I can see myself thinking


  • StarIlluminated
    February 22

    Edit | Reply
    I already told you it was good, but I shall tell you again.

    It was good.



    *KT*

    PS. I feel so repetitive. I always say, "it was good". I need to come up with more original comments...