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Garment of Grace

Knit and purl
lilac blooms;
garment of grace,
humor,
hope.




A contest entry

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  • Papagallo
    May 29
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    this is a very short poem and yet it says so much. good luck in the contest> Papagallo


  • penman gold member
    March 2
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    Wonderful

    Very creative and well done. Best of luck in the contest.

  • I think you've discribed yourself beautifully

    A wonderful write and I wish you all the best in the contest.

    Kate


  • Mirthryl
    February 22

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    Outstanding title. Excellent concept. Yes, for you I would choose those qualities: grace, humor, and hope. And I would have you remember your superb qualitities of heart robe you royally [as in purple!]


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    February 22

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    You are full of humor, hope and grace. But to me,
    in hues of purple! Ten great words about my
    wonderful sis! Good luck in the contest.


    • Freed by Mercy silver member
      February 22
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      hues- blue. Went for the sound. Almost the same color. Now, am I "true blue"?
      Personality, not color preference. But, i know what you mean.

      Yeah. Color me purple. I'll change it.

  • goalsv
    February 22
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    Well done!


  • ourgirlFriday
    February 22

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    I've found knitting very relaxing - I hope you do too! I prefer deep reds or bright orangegs for myself, but I've knitted in all colors for other people. Make yourself a prayer shawl.

    • Freed by Mercy silver member
      February 22
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      Great idea! I'm just learning, I'm in a class. So far, have only practiced. I have to choose a beginner project and buy some fun yarn.

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