Fullness of life
categorized by dwindling heights
sheltered souls seem entangled
in petty bias absolved from liquid dreams
that rot with cryptic meaning
yet we still live in contemplated fullness
Author notes
Prompt: Plethora
A contest entry
- QUICKIE!!!! by letters to no one.
1500 points, ended February 22, 2009, 9 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Awesome write if you ask me. You did an excellent job with this. Congratulations on the trophy. Keep up the amazing work and God bless you always in everything you do and write.
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wow
great job amaizing write keep up the good work stay true stay sic peace out and have a nice day -
"catagorized" ---> "categorized"
I have one question, what does, "pretty bias" mean?
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Petty-so small or unimportant as to warrant little or no attention
Bias-an attitude that always favors one way of feeling or acting especially without considering any other possibilities
Sorry about the typo, Spellcheck didn't catch it -
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Oh ok, it makes so much more sense now.
I read it as "pretty" even though I read it three times :/
Stupid eyesight!
I'll comment properly later =] when all the entries have been finished
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I've not had caffiene yet this morning, so the first time I read this, it went *wooooooooooossssh* straight over my head
Luckily, I never read a poem once
This was absolutely amazing. I love:
"sheltered souls seem entangled
in petty bias absolved from liquid dreams
that rot with cryptic meaning"
dayyyyum.
Thanks for sharing. Good luck, and God bless
Zach
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