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Tell Me That It Burns.

I want to exhale your body through smoke circles,
&engulf your eyes through rose-colored glasses,
just to get a glimpse of love,
of heart,
of something other than the habitual feeling of nausea.




Tell me that it burns when I touch you,
Sing me to sleep with the stanzas,
the explicit lyrics of the flames,
the dirty smoke,
&the ashes forming in between the bags under your eyes.




tell me, sugar,
give me something to believe in,
give me a melody to get intoxicated to.

Author notes

Playlist:

We Intertwined by: The Hush Sound
The Taste The Touch by: Asteria
Pushing The Shine by: Lovedrug

pushing the shine.

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Comments


  • living-dust
    March 7
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    i love this.


  • Sadpuppet
    February 28
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    realllllly good!! i love it!


  • PaintedParisPassion
    February 25

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    I love this shit!
    Its amazing! The imagry was the bomb diggity!

    ' something other than the habitual feeling of nausea.'

    i loooooooooooooooooooooooooooved that!

    Great job!

    -B