Through silent roads, you drove away from my car crash heart,
took all my confidence and dreams willingly ripped me slowly apart,
stirring me from my slumber every other week throughout the cold,
but as i reached out my arms, i realised there was nothing left to hold,
I forgave and forget every time you lost your path towards love and me,
but as i broke into pieces, you smiled knowing i would never let you free,
the moments turned from laughter to bitter tears as you kissed others lips,
chapters of our realtionship but you had your hands always on anothers hips,
fell in love in every seasons for years but this spring i am all alone without you,
shaking from the hurt, lying in a bathtub full of regrets battered black and blue.
Author notes
I haven't written for a while so not really sure on this but needed to let it out.After three years of the best but worst times of my life with one person.I feel like I have lost myself,now is time to find myself and who be the girl i once used to be,happy and content.It is weird how your life can be so planned and shaped revolving around someone you love and the next minute all gone,it is all different and moving on is maybe the hardest thing i have ever had to deal with....thanks for reading : ) x x
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"i broke into pieces, you smiled knowing i would never let you free,
the moments turned from laughter to bitter tears as you kissed others lips"
the hardest thing I think I will ever have to go through will be seeing the man I love with another woman. These lines brought me to tears because I know the day will come. I can feel your pain in this piece so strong. Only time can ease your sadness. But it will happen! Keep writing. Even though you're down, it's bringing out the very best in your poetry. Keep it up girl. But get it all out.
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My heart goes out to you. It sounds so sad but true. Sad to have a crash. But even sader when your mate always has hands on others hips. You really don't want somwone like that do you? -
I think I understand, in fact I think a lot on here can understand....
It will take a lot of writing and a lot of time...but I'm sure one day you open your eyes in the morning and you realise you can move further....
Take care
XXJeannette
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