Dreams stagnant,
collected into celestial cesspools
of crushed hopes,
where they suffocated in shattered stardust
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Two different worlds
one brilliantly lit,
with colors of the rainbow,
the other, dark and devilishly demented,
black, without light
so far apart
but reaching across time itself,
in memories
in emotions
never forgotten
Streams of consciousness still alive
even when tethered to the dead,
the dark stars, the black holes;
visions still reaching through dimensions
crossing all boundaries and borders
to break through,
to invade thoughts
forever connected through minds,
space, time, worlds unknown
Floating through the heavens,
soaring among the stars,
touching the moon,
dreams, thoughts, memories
….forever connected
Author notes
not sure...lol
I guess just thoughts on dreams, thoughts, and emotions - how they cross through time, stick in your mind, feeling like time hasn't passed at all.......
not sure...lol
A contest entry
- Universal Thoughts by islekine.
700 points, ended March 7, 2009, 17 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow this is another wonderful write. Congratulations on the gold trophy. It was very much a pleasure to read.
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Thank you 'Golden eyes 25' - glad you enjoyed this!
best wishes
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Edge of my Seat:
Very good poem about how the universe and dreams can connect us with who we are. Well, that's my interpretation. I love how you wrote about dark stars. It made me think of a dwarf star which dies and isn't visible to see. I really like how you wrote this. Very nicely done. Great job.
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Thank you very much 'Evemauy' - I'm pleased you enjoyed this.
The dark stars are sometimes the dark thoughts - that are ever connected to us through memories.....
best wishes
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I LOVE that picture! Awesome job yet agian! Keep it up! Thanks for sharing.
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Thank you 'Heroesrox' - I love the Cosmos pictures! Saw this one on Google and had to write something for it....lol....glad you enjoyed this.
best wishes
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Excellent
What a great creation. So very well expressed. Congrats on the gold.
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Thank you so much 'penman' - I'm honored by your comment.
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A pleasure to read. Thanks for you gift.
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thank you so much for reading 'Drifting Cloud' and your lovely comment. I am glad you enjoyed this.
(I love your user name!)
best wishes
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Zowie...
This had such a sensational flow...I sort of heard...
rod serling narrating...lol...weird I know...BUT it struck a real soul string! Well penned! Really your best so far...in my humble opinion!
Write on!
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Thank you so much 'islekine' - glad you enjoyed (doesn't Rod have a wonderful voice?....lolol
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very deep, thought provoking poem that you've written. the imagery is fantastic and vivid. you brought this pic to life. WOW..
good luck
kat
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Thank you kat - glad you liked this.
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This is incredable!
I would have not thought of it until I read your write!
wow! this is awesome!
Many Blessings to you my friend
Rend
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Thank you so much 'Rend the Veil' for reading and your wonderful comment. I am pleased you enjoyed this.
blessings
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this to me is like the light world is the happy part of your life and the dark is a bad time you had, most probably with someone who has died, -by their own hand?- and the two are equally strong within you and always you'll be united with this person who died, they were very important to you. I like writes that make me think, it was a pleasure to think about this one, not too complicated, nor too simple.
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Thank you so much 'celadia' for reading and your lovely comment. I am pleased you found this write interesting - and thought provoking.
It was a lot of thoughts going through my head - an 'old' love who was 'bad' basically - but the thoughts and feelings last through memories - connecting forever in the mind. And the universe is like that with us also - everything connecting. As they say, every act has a re-action.....and consequences.....and memories attached.
yes, there were 'deaths' floating through this also - the death of both of my parents in the last year, the death the docs say I will have prob. soon......
so - many thoughts just drifting and colliding together...lol
again, thanks
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Like Heaven and Hell? That's what occurred to me about the two realms.
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Thanks for reading 'Judith....' - yes, heaven and hell are connected, too. I believe, in one way or another, everything is connected.
blessings
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Definitely "Universal Thinkers"
This is simply fantastic! You have taken a fact and woven it in a way that reveals the complexities of our universe: the fact that we are not the thinkers, merely the chooser of which thought to bring captive. From the day we are born, there exists that connection to our Creator Father: which gets either stiffled or enhanced by the earthly parents. Still, there always remains a certain awareness of God, despite a person's adamant denials.
This is such an exceptionally good poem, Sis! It has to be a winner!
Luv & hugs, SisBon
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Thank you so much 'BonnieQ' - glad you enjoyed this.
blessings/luv/hugs/best wishes
SisBoom
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Interesting.For sure there would be no light without darkness.It is the backcloth to our dreams.I like where your thoughts went with this, for as you say darkness and light are for ever connected, Ros
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Thank you so much 'Gwenevere' for reading and your lovely comment. I am pleased you found these thoughts interesting.
Yes, darkness and light are forever connected. As are dreams and emotions. An old love can still bring emotions years later, that seem as 'new' as they were in the past. And when one tries to escape the darkness into the light, the memory of the darkness is still in them forever....still connected....
again, thanks!
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wow, this reminds me of the time i was in the hospital and felt like I was disconnected from the living,eerie feelings, I am sure this suits the contest very well
good luck
MM
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Thank you so much for reading 'misticmoonlite' and for your lovely comment.
I feel 'disconnected' all the time....lolol
best wishes
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I am sure that yours is much better then mine lol great write thanks for sharing best wishes always be well
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Thank you so much Starz - glad you enjoyed this.
I'm sure it's not 'better' than yours at all, maybe just 'different'.
luv, best wishes, hugs
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Got a mix there of brilliant images...capturing the God of Wonders. Blessings.
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Thank you so much 'Denerica' - glad you enjoyed these strange, wandering, lost in space thoughts....lol
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