look in the mirror
what reflects is a mannequin
inside and out
no feeling,
no life
heart turned to concrete
your blood runs thin until it dries.
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option 2 for Come one, Come All!!!
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Comments
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i agree,
with the girl below me.
its short, but it gets its point across.
great!
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short but meaningful. Thanks for entering
and good luck
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i liked it... i would have loved it if your had written more but the words were incredibkly powereful. thanks for entering my contest.
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short but very powerful. words hit hard. very well done. :-) good luck in the contest.
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a very good write , thank you for entering and good luck in the contest with this deeply sad but very good write
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Wow, i can really realte to this good job babe. xx
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