So beautiful, so shy as she lays on the bed in front of me
A smile of anticipation lights up my face as I approach her
I sit beside her and lean in for a kiss, those brown eyes close as our lips meet
I can feel her heart pounding against my chest
Our tongues touch and over and over again
I kiss from her lips down to her neck, softly biting as I go
Pulling her shirt over her head, only to straddle over top of her
Her bra is mine for the taking, I slide it down to reveal perfect pink nipples
Running my hands over them, they immediately become erect
My mouth envelops them, sucking gently and all the while her hand is playing with my hair
Working my way down her milk-white stomach, stopping just above the belt line
I start to remove her jeans
"You can tell me to stop whenever you want", I whisper
She smiles and nods as my hands run up and down her legs
I kiss her inner thigh and shes already shaking
I start to pull off her lace panties, only to see a wet pussy begging to be touched
I blow air on it lightly while tickling the outside with my finger and a few kisses
Spreading her apart, I run my tongue from bottom to top, savoring each second
Her body gets chills and starts to shake
My warm tongue finds her clit, flicking it with a soft suck here and there
Her back is arching off the bed, her breathing is heavier
I slide a slender finger inside her, pulling it in and out
"How about 2 babe?", she replies promptly by saying, "..sure, just don't stop!"
I love that shes feeling good so I quicken the flicking of my tongue as I add another finger
Her body is tense and shes moaning quietly
Shes about to cum, I pull out my fingers to lick it all up
My eyes make contact with hers, shes out of breath and but still laying there as beautiful as ever
I kiss my way back up her body and then....
Author notes
Babe, I challenge you to finish this poem from your point of view 
A contest entry
- Come Have Fun With The Bedroom Boss by Mrs LadyEnthralling.
900 points, ended March 27, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Sensual, Erotica, Love and Happiness Contest by MYsecondchance.
700 points, ended July 9, 26 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
1st poem in a long time ;)
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hmm?,i say we try this hun .
I can be you slave.
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sounds good
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WOW...just wow.
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thanksssss a ton
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fucken smoking i love this poem you described in very detail being with the same flesh this poem is bad for the new me but hell i must admit being a ex of loving pussy this is fucken marvelous
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thank you
lol x pussy lover huh?
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lol love it babe! u are the best at writing stuff like this !! i lvoe it lol ...it definitly gets you thinking and picturing stuff for sure lol
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hehe thank you babe, lol
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I love this from you but you left us hanging!! Sounds like one of my lovely nights with one of my ex-girlfriends but instead of milky white stomach it was toasty brown and with a hint of sweetness on her skin Great piece and good luck hon
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wow this is sooo amazing! i havent write one in a while
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lol thanks babe, u should. we could collaborate
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that sounds sexy! lol get everyone all wet and hard :)
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hehehe
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its true! lol they would be begging 4 more :))
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i kno they would lol
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i love it!
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ty cutie
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Hot
Just wonderfully sexy and hot.....and *bites lip* awesome
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thanxxxxx
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thats one way to reawaken the muse Chris. I'm sure you've managed to reawaken alot of things with this poem. You did a good job keeping perspective though in this poem as alot of people tend to be jumpy as far as perspective and tense go. You did a great job and I hope to see more of your writing here in the near future.
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lol. thanks dan....ima try to keep writing
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he he... My first erotica poem
Christy,
Never read erotica before... so in a sense you broke my virginity ... LMAO....
But from a poem's point of view.. I think to write erotica is much tougher than a non - erotica write...
So hat's off to you lady... I think your profile says you are sixteen... I think the emotions of the act is captured extremely well.
Though a hetero... surely my ex had the same kind of feeling during the act...
So thanks for refreshing the memories...
and oh! I doubt if you liked my poem... But it's ok...
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lol awsum. and ya i think it is too, lol ya im 16 glad u liked it thanks! and yes i did like ur poem
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that poem...wow.
hot and steamy.
good write.
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thanks lol and no its not true...i just wrote it for a girl
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dang girl...
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th was so was beautiful and very hot!
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thanks! glad u liked it
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me? write somthing liek this. HAHA i'll try babe....
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lol cant wait
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