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From one Hell to Another

Acid tears burn sadness into my skin,
Pale from fright and burning from the torture.
Tattoos of hate are branded from my sin,
Acid tears burn sadness in my skin.

A thick scar heaving at the empty weight,
Lapping it’s tough at the doorstep of fate.


Blood pores out from some far and quiet void,
Where all that can be heard: whispers of screams,
Yells that drill into my head, thoughts destroyed;
Blood pores out from some far and quiet void.

A mist clings and devours just to kill,
A pair of decrepit hands chocking still.


Parasites, eat my life to live their own,
They leave me to suffer, to plead for death.
At last screams cease echoing, I’m alone;
Parasites, eat my life to live their own.

Pressed to broken glass in prison  I lie,
Death ringing loud, Loud begging just to die.


At last somehow I trip into darkness,
My teeth are stained with blood and cursed with names.
Fire licks at my face: burning caress.
At last somehow I trip into darkness.

I quickly glance at my charred ice cold hands
Starving and chocking, quiet in demands.



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Iamthebeatles's dark poem

words: Acid, blood, death, empty, hate, ice, kill, pale, quite, suffer, torture, void, yell

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  • redrumdog31
    February 22, 2009

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    Nice dark poem i like it
    good luck in the contest!!
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