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my lips but jesus







 

my toes touch
your toes
my knees touch
your knees
my thighs touch
your thighs
my hips
touch your hips
my mouth takes
your breast your
fingers touch
my lips but jesus
says he raises the dead
my lips touch
his brow
my fingers touch
your breast your
breast takes
my lips my lips
sigh the name of
jesus
your hips
touch my thighs
your thighs
touch my lips
your knees wave
to touch the sun’s
moonlit reflection
but jesus says he raises
the dead I say jesus
he sighs your
soul and body through
my life










 
 
 
 
 
 
 

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  • bluefeather
    May 28, 2009
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    Nothing I could write would honour this enough.


  • chills
    April 25, 2009

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    Oh this is just.... so descriptive of temptation. And of the redemption in (I imagine..... *smiles*) the consummation. This was a fine wine and smoked salmon sort of a read. Excellent. Thank you so much.


  • Vondain
    April 25, 2009
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    i love it...


  • LadyElbereth
    April 25, 2009
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    Oh My

    This is so beautiful...


    Lady E


  • ricachic gold member
    April 25, 2009
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    Nicely written

    simple and familiar we can all relate

  • Clare Mayer
    April 25, 2009
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    good expression

    short and sweet


  • Night Hope gold member
    February 22, 2009

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    blushes profusely...& proudly, too...lol

    Holy...!!!

    Yes. 'Tis. 'Tis Holy. 'Tis sacred. 'Tis beautiful, adoring, sensual, pleasurable, spiritual, filled with flesh & fire, heart & soul, fingers & eyes, mouths filled with embers, spilling poetry across the room, across cyberspace, "across time & sand", as Nic says...Ohhh, my Beloved One...I'm gonna getcha for this one. C'mere, you. No, REALLY. I mean it. Pleeeeeeeease??? I love it. Not as much as I love you, but it's in the runnin'. Good luck in the contest...everybody else. *thinks* (should I? shouldn't I? hmmm...I haven't slept & he knows it, but...)

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