i can't keep my vision straight;
and for you, i await.
you've never looked so handsome;
i swear, someone could hold you for ransom.
theres something in my way;
and here; i lay,
ever waiting your return to me.
because i know; we were meant to be.
even in the arms of another;
i couldn't think of anyone other;
than this boy right in front of me;
while i'm here; a detainee.
theres something shining in my path;
i swear, you've got me in your rath.
i miss the old days;
things were always in decays.
i could describe your every feature;
you're such a beautiful creature.
your soft sweet lips;
and the gentle sway of your hips.
i love you every move;
it's like you've got something to prove.
you're so breath taking;
it's almost aching.
you wrench my heart in a bind;
i'm afraid what you'll find.
if you look to deep inside;
you'll see just how much i've cried.
is it just me that thinks this;
is just not enough for pure bliss.
i swear this'll be the last time;
because it's from now own a crime.
Author notes
well; this is horrid. it's 3:30 in the morning, i'm tired.. and it's been so long since i've written a poem. i hope you like it. 8D
not my best, is it?
Comments
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Wow this is really good!
There is so much emotion,
And I can tell what
yo are trying so say,
like what the message is.
well, what i can see from it
is that you love this person to death.
and if you hurting inside
hurts him, then you are going to try to stop,
or try to put it at a halt for the time being.
my faverite part was:
you wrench my heart in a bind;
i'm afraid what you'll find.
if you look to deep inside;
you'll see just how much i've cried.
I have felt this so much,
and nobody understands.
this is completely and utterly
amazingness!
i got a lot from this poem.
keep up the good work..
cause ur a freaking good poet
anna banana
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