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Dreams of a White Tree

Of the things dear to my heart I ponder,
To leave behind this world;
I wish to fall into the sleep of ages.
A dream awaits me -
Of bliss and content
Earth-bound no longer...
On that nameless cloud,
Away, away...
To the stars and ageless sleep.

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  • plainoljoe
    February 22

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    I'd change 'bond' to 'bound' to be correct.
    Your day will come but the time to choose is not yours.

    Joe


    • Muriel
      February 22
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      Ack! Yes, it is intended to say "bound." Hmm, I wonder how I missed that... At any rate, thank you so much for the applause and and comments.

      Muriel

      • plainoljoe
        February 22
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        Muriel, I don't want to appear just another spelling critic because in context of the write, following the word 'bond' with 'servant' would also fit. Truth is we are all 'earth bond servants' trying to earn a wage for survival

        Joe