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My Everything

It doesn’t have to be a prince in shining armor to steal my heart…
Just the kiss of a man who is willing to give me his.

I wanted to write in elegance, the most intoxicating words inscribed…
But I couldn’t find the tone to set the mood that fits…

So maybe something simpler could capture how I feel for you…
Something that could go a little more like this…

You’re my everything
Even if you’re not riding
On a stallion emblazoned in silver…
You’re my everything
Though we fight sometimes
We’re always getting better…
You’re my everything
Baby no matter what you say to me
I’ll know that you are forever
And ever…
My sweet everything…

I tried to find a tune to match the harmony in my heart…
But no song could catch the meaning it held.

I wanted to find something sweeter than just dull and clich&#;
Yet the melody never really flowed so well.

I wanted to hear the song out loud that I hear in my head…
But the notes would not ensnare exactly what I felt.

But you’re my everything
Even if you’re not saving
A town or village from a villain or disaster…
You’re my everything
Though we fight sometimes
We’d be making love for hours thereafter…
You’re my everything
Baby no matter what you say to me
I’ll know that you are forever
And ever…
My sweet everything…
You’re my sweet everything…

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Comments


  • Lyrically N Gaged
    July 24, 2009
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    well, got damn. I love this...


  • SwaGGtastic
    February 25, 2009

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    GREAT WRITE

    This is Really Sweet.. < -- Sounding Gay Comming From Me.. but it is.. I have had someone who shared that once in a lifetime uncoditional feeling of love.. I Miss it.. this brought them memories back..


  • MommaFallenAngel gold member
    February 24, 2009

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    I absoutely loved it

    Keep on writing great job Searra