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Into the setting sun....

Every step is carefully messured

Nothing taken for granted

Time stands almost still with the last rays of the sun

Eternity caught with in a moment

Reality become only a dream

Inching out of reach
Never to be caught
Till the sun finally sets
Over and over time replays
Dangeling your castle in the sky just with in your
Reach but far enough that you can not catch
Even a thread of that long awaited paradise
Always just beyond your finger tips
Mirroring the dreams that cannot survive in reality
So slowly step upon the stairway into the setting sun

Author notes

option 2 and slightly inspired be option ones picture 5. The Bridge To The Clouds -- http://media.photobucket.com/image/photography/RELLA_016/clouds.jpg?o=165

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  • Denerica
    February 24
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    Beautiful imagery, breathless words captivating the pic, Blessings.


  • SoundsOfSilence
    February 22

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    Wow

    Speechless...

    Very well written, great take on the prompt, I love the way this turned out.
    Thank you very much for entering my contest.

    ~~silently-breaking