Tropical cyan fuels impulses that
Transcend logic and emotion.
Two flickers of jade atop salacious
Curves approach, inciting
Weeks of indulgence hoping for
Supernatural connections.
Intimately she whispers
"Lets go..."
Author notes
Based on:
http://werol.deviantart.com/art/invitation-62274362
A contest entry
- Quickie 15/30/60 by Kuranya.
700 points, ended February 22, 2009, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Nicely done a very good choice of words to describe your story. Well done. Best to you in the contest
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Very inventive take here.
Well done. and best of luck to you in the contest.
Delila
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I love your sense of imagery. My favorite line is "Two flickers of jade and exotic".
You are a wonderful poet! Good luck in the contest.
God bless,
Zach
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