I see eyes that reveal a troubled soul,
A heart that pumps for the distant goal.
On your arms are the marks of the past,
In your mind are thoughts that last.
In your spirit is a winner struggling to get out,
But it's going to win this eternal bout.
A contest entry
- Look at me...What do you see...? by Clinging-to-Life.
450 points, ended March 3, 2009, 10 entries
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Very true
One can over come any obstacle...we are all gifted with that ability. The question is, whether we are willing to work through it, or just give up.
Thanks for the short yet elequent and meaningful write. -
you can overcome Annything no matter what your past is. Anything
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Short and strong, nice rhymes.
Best of luck in the contest.
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Well this came straight from the heart. Very powerful message here, especially the ending of the poem.
Nice job here.
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this was a great poem, short, but powerful. the rhyming really works in this piece.
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