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A girl

even with all the things you say to me
I never thought I'd feel
all these things I feel for you
nothing else seems real

through your smile
your smell
and your lips I can tell
you belong by my side

nothing else makes sense
nothing else should
I wouldn't change a single thing
even if I could

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