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First Encounter :

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For weeks I have been pursuing you,
and finally you are mine.
Kissing those sweet red succulent lips ,
send shivers down my spine.

I kiss my way to your mounds of joy,
my hot breath gives you goose pimples.
My tongue runs lightly over the little bumps ,
and it hardens up your  nipples.

With one hand I run further down ,
and find that there’s no hair.
And softly massage my fingers in,
so easily and with care.

The moans that you make tell me,
that you love what I am doing.
With one more suck and one more lick,
I release the nipple I am chewing..

With my head between your inner thighs ,
I can see your juices flowing.
I lick and kiss every soft sweet inch,
till I get where I am going.

My tongue glides slowly savoring your taste,
running deep inside your slit.
And with my lips around it and tongue
I suck hard upon your clit.

Your moan tells me I’ve lit a fire,
and I stoke it till you cum.
Then again and again I hold you there,
until the job is done.

P.N.










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  • Ann45 gold member
    March 6
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    opps

    hehehe stumbled onto this one ok bye


  • condor gold member
    February 28

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    Since I am running out of your reads, I had to come and look at this. Ummm! Well done indeed and your imagery is very vivid.


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    February 23

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    Well done, I love the imagery
    and rhyme in this one. Thanks a lot
    for entering and good luck to you!




    Jeremy0826


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    February 23

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    well done here.
    Enjoyed this piece (lol)

    best wishes to you in the contest

    Passions

  • A floatingleaf silver member
    February 23
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    Very sensual and hot...


  • Parearoo
    February 22

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    Oh, wow

    Is your reader's heart rate supposed to have picked up speed? Wow, just wow! Beautifully written; so much detail in so few stanzas. Brilliant!
    Best of luck in your contest!


  • liltulip gold member
    February 22

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    oh my!

    You have done a lovely job here! so hot and passionate, ty for sharing this and good luck in the contest!!!


  • Rainbow7
    February 22

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    It's HOT...real hot. Every move is seductive. Every gesture is lustful. You have a magic touch. You make the love play most erotic. I love that.


  • Jesann gold member
    February 22
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    Sensual and passionate.
    Very nicely done.
    A great write.
    All the best in the contest.


  • hotchocolate gold member
    February 22

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    A good piece penned from you here hon! I wish you luck in the contest

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