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Web lovers

mountains do not come in-between
nor seas block,
a love that crosses boundaries
let us talk with each other,
without inhibitions.

here appearance do not count
you let your imagination free,
messages running at lightening speed
both siting face to face
separated miles apart.

promises are not delivered
only sweet talking,
that never turn bitter
faith is untested.

a solace for loner
boon for shy to express;
name incognito
timid has  field day
pouring pent up love.

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  • honey bear
    February 23
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    this is such a good write and a perfect description of internet * love * passions over distant miles where promises are only kept in dreams and people feel free to express themselves the way they never could in real life, harmless fun to some, marriage breaker or heart breaker to others. good work my friend.


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    February 22

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    Beautifully Romantic...

    Thank you for your warm-hearted entry in my Internet Connection contest. I enjoyed reading your tenderly and thoughtfully written poem!! I thank you for sharing your musings with us!! Wishing you the best in all you do. Take care, and thanks again. Peace & Hugs xx Cyn
    P.S. You're so right, I suppose some shy and lonely folks would say that an Internet relationship is better than none at all...


    • Venugopal gold member
      February 22
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      thank you for your kind comments

      you are so gentle and beautiful

      Venu


  • Treasure 5 gold member
    February 22

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    awsome

    what a wonderful poem with pent up love. Especially if you don't have some one to share your love with. This was a beautiful read.


  • maralisa silver member
    February 22

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    aw wow a very beautiful poem dad good luck in the contestmaralisa


  • Barely Breathing gold member
    February 22

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    This is so beautiful and was such a pleasure to read I really loved this and the content you were writing about. It is so amazing how one can talk to another so very far away and there is such a conection there. WEll done and all the best for the contest.

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