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Kayla, if I could.

I would hold you
I would hold you so tight,
Because one day, honey,
It's going to be alright.
You won't wake up scared,
You won't wake up sad,
Because one day, honey,
Life won't seem so bad,
I would stroke your hair,
I would hold your hands,
Because one day, honey,
It won't seem like everyone misunderstands,
I would tell you that it was going to be okay,
I would tell you that you're going to be fine
Because one day, honey,
You'll know that pain doesn't define.
I would.
I would if I could,
but babe, I can't.
This is the best I can do,
The best that I can do for you,
But one day, honey,
Life will start, long overdue.

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  • LovelyTraces
    February 22

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    Aw Sarah! You break my heart!

    You bring the tears back and you make it all better in 23 lines. Only you could do that. :]

    Thankyou so so much.