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Forever Is The End

In the battle of finding the truth,
You were shining, brighter than the sun.
We never said forever,
We knew saying forever would be the end.

I said forever, far more than I could recall.
I broke what we had,
And your still my world.

You'll always be my light, when I need an answer.
When i'm fighting, and defending myself,
I'll always remember...

I am the one who broke us apart,
I let my mind take the actions,
I didn't follow my heart.

I can go on writing till I die,
I would die for you,
If dying would bring us together again.

I would do anything that I know of,
Anything to take back the words I have said.
I do care, I care alot, I swear I do,
And I know that you know it,
And I know that I've hurt you so bad many times,
But it wasn't on purpose, I never meant anything to break us apart.

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  • BookwyrmMuse
    August 5
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    So powerful. You really put your feelings into this. I'm sorry about what happened and I hope you are feeling beeter.


  • vampireprincess
    February 25

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    I just cried.... I LOVE this poem... I hope that you're okay and if you're not that you'll talk to someone.


  • HollowWiRe
    February 22
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    I'm soo sorry, I think I know what brought this on, and I feel really bad about it. Take care okay?


  • MYsecondchance
    February 21

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    wow this is sooo sad, I hope whatever happened that your ok...I'm here if you need to talk man.
    Take care


  • x Simply x Me x
    February 21
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    OMG its heartbreaking. wow im sppeachhhless!

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