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Veiled Innocence

Hiding behind veiled innocence,
she longs to become a woman ~
while her heart clings

to dreams of remaining a child...

 

 

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20 Words

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A contest entry

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  • Soft-Rain
    February 22

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    I found this to be so sweet but intriging...our minds look and see what we notice.
    A beautiful write.


  • maralisa silver member
    February 22

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    a brilllant take on the promt congratulations on your shinymaralisa


  • PerfectImperfection
    February 21

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    A well penned take to the prompt here, thoughtful and nicely done. Best wishes!


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    February 21

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    ooooh! very nice take/twist on the prompt, love where you went with the end.
    best of luck

    love light & laughter
    Tasha


  • ZachP gold member
    February 21

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    You have, indeed, captured a tender and vulerable moment. With a handful of words, you've blone me away.

    Well done, and good luck.
    God bless,
    Zach


  • Hello...No.One.Home silver member
    February 21

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    I love this, I feel like I've been caught in her struggles of becoming a woman or cling to the hopes and dreams of childhood.

    A wonderful write and I wish you all the best in the contest.

    Kate

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