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a brilliance

my long bending fingers sigh like strung bows

in the wind


when you speak myths to your lover’s remembrance
for we are purples, pinks and dark, dark reds

you glow naked astride me
I blaze like a wild pony’s mane



we are not
remembrances

we are alive, a brilliance
requiring touch











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  • Night Hope gold member
    February 23

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    Sighhh...



    Remember, Danny...you told me last night that when you fall in love with a poem you will sometimes only leave a rose behind, without remark? Disregard my "mere" words, I beg of thee...



  • Sonja
    February 22

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    No comment, no suggestion... there is nothing but beauty in your words.
    ~Sonja~