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Truely True!

Amalgam of thoughts
  precipitated in the inner mind
      produce chemical dreams
        of aching memories

The acidic tears
  from dreamless eyes
      draw a permanent
          line of mark

Saying -
    love  never dies!

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propmt: http://morteque.deviantart.com/art/Gothic-Dream-79369543

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  • Canadamomma
    February 22, 2009

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    This is beautifully penned I love how the lines form eye candy as well.
    "The acidic tears
    from dreamless eyes
    draw a permanent
    line of mark"
    Wonderful imagery.


    • Kiddy
      February 22, 2009
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      glad that you loved my little poem...thanks for the bronze...