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Unplanned

Bring my thoughts through split second timing
your face in a box I see even in my dreams
imagine you here, laying next to me
yet you are, but on a screen

A screen, I want to so lovingly caress

I want to see you, hold your hand
to know and love you, just to feel gentle arms
loving me tight, a relationship beyond means
A truth, beyond fiction, I need to feel you

I need to know, you are truly real, my Internet Love...

I didn't plan to fall in love with you...

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Dedicated to Tom, SGT. Strachan .... I love you baby...

Thanks sis for running this contest...

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  • Bring my thoughts through split second timing
    your face in a box I see even in my dreams
    imagine you here, laying next to me
    yet you are, but on a screen

    A screen, I want to so lovingly caress

    An excellence beyond words. Seems sadness of a love
    narrating inner cyclones.

    Congrats on Silver. Keep it up.


  • xXxBloodloverxXx
    February 24
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    so sweetly written . i can see your true and pure love in it .keep up the good work.


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    February 22

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    Beautifully Touching and Romantic!!

    Thank you for your heart-felt entry in my Internet Connection contest. I enjoyed reading your tender, thoughtfully written poem!! You have lived through the realm of cyber-experience, and I thank you for sharing your musings with us!! Wishing you the best in all you do. Take care, and thanks again. Peace & Hugs xx Cyn


  • GoodbyeFarewell
    February 22

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    wow

    truly amazing very beautiful great job amazing write keep it up keep on going stay true stay sic peace out and have a nice day


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    February 21
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    awww this beautiful.

    lucky guy.


  • Tom The Invader
    February 21
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    aaaw. . . You put feelings to words well, with an eloquence that's rare. Awesome job

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