Bring my thoughts through split second timing
your face in a box I see even in my dreams
imagine you here, laying next to me
yet you are, but on a screen
A screen, I want to so lovingly caress
I want to see you, hold your hand
to know and love you, just to feel gentle arms
loving me tight, a relationship beyond means
A truth, beyond fiction, I need to feel you
I need to know, you are truly real, my Internet Love...
I didn't plan to fall in love with you...
Author notes
Dedicated to Tom, SGT. Strachan .... I love you baby...
Thanks sis for running this contest...
A contest entry
- Internet Connection by Cynthia Gaines.
1400 points, ended February 27, 16 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Interesting?
Comments
1 - 6 of 6
-
Bring my thoughts through split second timing
your face in a box I see even in my dreams
imagine you here, laying next to me
yet you are, but on a screen
A screen, I want to so lovingly caress
An excellence beyond words. Seems sadness of a love
narrating inner cyclones.
Congrats on Silver. Keep it up.


-
so sweetly written . i can see your true and pure love in it .keep up the good work.


-
Beautifully Touching and Romantic!!
Thank you for your heart-felt entry in my Internet Connection contest.
I enjoyed reading your tender, thoughtfully written poem!!
You have lived through the realm of cyber-experience, and I thank you for sharing your musings with us!!
Wishing you the best in all you do.
Take care, and thanks again.
Peace & Hugs
xx Cyn 


-
wow
truly amazing very beautiful great job amazing write keep it up keep on going stay true stay sic peace out and have a nice day -
awww this beautiful.
lucky guy.

-
aaaw. . . You put feelings to words well, with an eloquence that's rare. Awesome job
1 - 6 of 6






