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Silence

“You live as few men dare to dream.”
Waiting for solace
Breathing in the stars
Speaking in constellations
The rain drops tear at your flesh
Acidic, pulsing
A interstellar anomaly
Solar focus begins to fade
Eclipses of elliptical sunbeams
Make their way through your soul
At peace
“Silence”
   


Author notes

Something I just jotted down. It seems to me as if 3 years of not writing has made me improve slightly. Hope you enjoy.

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  • morgana raven Greeters member
    February 22

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    I really liked the way you ended this, and the opening line. Your word choice was beautiful and imagery well put into the lines. I'm glad to see new writes from you ^_^
    Laura.


  • Cant force beloved
    February 21

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    I like it, it's nice. I personally found difficulty with "The rain drops tear at your flesh / Acidic, pulsing" but it could be just me.....