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Ungraspable Silhouette

Along the silhouettes of the sun
In but of nothing there is no salvation
Sunken into the depths of foolish sanctity
Without forgiveness or a thought of mind
For nothing, yet for all
There is blank.

Beyond the eyes that reflect no glint
And refuse to show it's solution
It's significant knowledge
Kept into the shadows of mistakes
Buried in lies and countered with doubt
For nothing, yet for all
There is hatred.

Are you lonely, forsaken child
Was it for injustice, and injustice alone
All that glimmers are soon to fade
While all that fades are soon to glimmer
That fact pushed into the flames of resistance
All those who offer their assistance
to remove the blindfold humanity has been tricked into
For nothing, yet for all
There is compassion.

Wherever tears may fall
While there is no intent
The length of this impurity is forever
To remove the other is futile
To sink the flames into sea
Futile, along with the understanding of the misconception
We go along the blank monochrome space
Along the sun, the lies, the resistance
For nothing, yet for all
There is the answer.

Author notes

I have NO idea what this is about. I just typed whatever sentences came into my head. I was in crazy poet mode

During the half of this poem, I started to make sense, and thus making the poem a bit more controlled. XD

Honesty is my future's savior

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  • myusikah
    March 25, 2009

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    Why have people not said anything about this yet?

    Ohh, I see. You stopped writing for contests...
    Either that, or you blocked non-friend comments...


    • Orange Tides
      April 7, 2009
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      lol yeah. I don't like prompts anymore.

      • myusikah
        April 13, 2009
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        I don't. I never did.
        I'm not in poetry mood nowadays, I'm more into reading.


        • myusikah
          April 13, 2009
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          But on second thought, prompts could be very good for me.
          I mean, remember that last poem I did? For Cabezas' class? xD