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Loveless

Who is the one for me?
What should she look like?
What should she sound like?
What could she bring?

Trying to find the one for me
is trully hard.
Not knowing what love feels like.
Not knowing the true meaning of it.

What comes to mind when
someons asks you what love is?
What would you say?
Would you stand there quietly?
or will you answer with passion,
because you know what love feels like.

For me its not that simple,
not knowing what love is.
For me the answer be a blur,
for I dont know what love is.

Will I be lonely for the rest of my life?
Does anyone know the true meaning of love?
for I am lost in this,
life breaking disease,
trapped in this thing,
Called love.

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  • BookwyrmMuse
    August 5

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    Love is different for everyone.But I believe that there is someone for everyone but the world is a big place. Love is work you don't find it and get to sit back you have to work to keep your love healthy and not stagnate.
    Good job Devin one small typo line 10 someone not someons


  • HollowWiRe
    February 24

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    I believe love is a mirage that people think up to make their shitty lives seem a little more livable. However, I believe 98% of the time it ends in more heartbreak that the actual desired result....sorry if this made you more sad...


  • x Simply x Me x
    February 21

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    Wow Devin! Rough, but the concept is beautiful! and thats a question we all ask.

    Some ppl say love is a state of mind.