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Don't It Always Seem To Go?

That was one of the things
I loved about you
You were real
You were there

And I could feel you

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as apposed to now

some days I'm crazed

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  • estbelle gold member
    February 21
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    this is beautiful...when emotions are raw as these

    Thank you for the read

    belle