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Dis(ease)

Dangerously cataclysmic effects
swinging by chandeliers as blood flows
effortlessly sinking to emptiness in
deaths dying throes

purge the sterling blood rolling through these veins

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  • GoodbyeFarewell
    February 22, 2009

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    wow

    great job on the prompt lovely job love it keep it up keep on going stay true stay sci peace out and have a nice day


  • ShelbieSchizo
    February 22, 2009
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    Wonderful :]


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    February 21, 2009
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    me likey


  • Scyphon
    February 21, 2009

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    This was really well done, I have not yet read them all but this seems to be gold ^_^ great write, best of luck, take care and be well


  • maralisa silver member
    February 21, 2009
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    a wonderful take on the promt good luck in the contestmaralisa

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