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There Was Good.

I lay dead on the ground
as your finger tips disappear

The life i once wanted
is gone.

What i thought would be great
ended up as a nightmare

You cant change one
that has there own plans.

You cant help one
that has there own will.

I had never believe anybody
more than i believed you.

The truths.
The Lies
The smiles.
The Laughs.

You told me what i wanted to hear.
You told me what i would believe.

You used me.
You tore me apart.
made & broke me.
It was all part of the plan.

"I care for you"

Was all you could say
as i walked out.

I look back
and hate myself for ever thinking
it could work.

Removing you completely tears me up
It seems impossible

I was your stay-at-home girlfriend
Your maid.
Your organizer
At your becken call.

You knew what you had
and what control you had.

Minutes
after hours
after days
after weeks

I wouldnt hear from you.
Your excuses were endless.

Time is what kept us together
and what tore us apart.




I just keep remembering..

The sunny skies
and the warmth
that brought us together.

The endless hours of happiness
and laughter.

It all over powers the bad
because there was good

There was good..

You were

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  • Time focus on Me
    February 25

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    Alsome write

    You cant change one
    that has there own plans.

    You cant help one
    that has there own will.

    I had never believe anybody
    more than i believed you.

    The truths.
    The Lies
    The smiles.
    The Laughs.

    You told me what i wanted to hear.
    You told me what i would believe.

    You used me.
    You tore me apart.
    made & broke me.
    It was all part of the plan.

    "I care for you"

    Was all you could say
    as i walked out.

    I look back
    and hate myself for ever thinking
    it could work.

    Removing you completely tears me up
    It seems impossible

    I was your stay-at-home girlfriend
    Your maid.
    Your organizer
    At your becken call.

    You knew what you had
    and what control you had.

    Minutes
    after hours
    after days
    after weeks

    I wouldnt hear from you.
    Your excuses were endless.

    Time is what kept us together
    and what tore us apart.
    You did a bravo job with this poem and I know excatly where u coming from with this poem..I just came out of something such as this this week and it was the same way so i know how u feel with this poem..Hold on strong..Once again this poem is outstandin n I loved it.. Pls keep da ink flowin i love ya work cause its beautiful.. Once again Great job


  • rockmyrainbowsoxoff
    February 21
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    I love it! I don't really know what to say I'm bad at commenting, but I like it a lot.