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But I can't

I want to give up. 
I want to forget and move one on, and never ever look back.
I want to be what I used to be. 
I want to do what I used to do. 
I want to know what I used to know.
I want to smell, taste, touch. 
I want to cry.  Sigh.  Fly.  Beyond what I have ever been.
I want to see.  Be free. 
I want to know.  to go.  say hello to all those things I left behind.
but I can't.
I can't give up.
I can't forget.
I can't be.
I can't do.
I can't know.
I can't smell.  Taste.  Touch.
I can't cry.
I can't see.
I can't know.
I can only say so.

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