Why
Do I
Like to fly
To soar up high
In the azure sky
New maneuvers to try
New and novel skill apply
The law of gravity defy
Flap at my friends as I pass them by by
Makes me a much happier guy that's why
Author notes
Also a Monorhyme.
In a list
A contest entry
- Just Rhyme by shewalksintomine.
1200 points, ended March 10, 2009, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Kudos for choosing a form poem. Impressive that you were able to rhyme all lines, including the ones that are one and two syllables.
Thanks for entering and best of luck to you. -
Very skillfully done. A tricky pattern and you made a great little poem with it. The subject is light and delightful.
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I don't think I've ever read an etheree before. Is it ten lines and each numbered line contains that number of syllables? I guess I learn something new every day. Well done.
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