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with open arms

pleasures of the past,
fears of the future,
live with me everyday of my life.
hiding behind closed doors,
knowing they will be let out soon.
knowing that when they are,
i will welcome them with open arms,
with an open heart,
without thinking of the consequences,
or the inevitable pain.
knowing i will soon regret
opening my doors,
opening my arms,
opening my heart.

A contest entry

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  • XxAmongtheBrokenxX
    March 2

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    *gapes* This is far more than alright. I love this! I especially like how you kept it flowing nicely and I found the last three lines to be rather powerful. Thank you so much for entering the contest! Good luck!