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Internet Connection Infection

She found the man of her dreams
On-line as impossible as that might seem
Meeting people from all walks of life
Hooking up together and turning out right

At first I thought that was inconceivable
Well sometimes it really works unbelievable
I must confess I tried it myself for awhile
Met this man my age and we had similar styles
After typing two times ready to move in with child

Another’s picture was his little brother
At fifty he had one leg and lived with his mother
Now on the other hand I have this girlfriend that sings
She met this guy and is now wearing his humongous ring

A chemist by trade not a home made Meth lab
Financially stable, homeowner, and no stories so sad
They got married and now have children a boy & girl
I tell you this internet connection is an amazing world

Be careful my friends and believe me its true
Don’t give out to much information whatever you do
The desire to connect can become an infection to you
And some people are just out to see how many people they can screw. (Literally)

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  • Dragonbabyx3
    February 27
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    Beautiful work on this piece, and how very true! Wonderful work on this!


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    February 22

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    Brilliantly Thought-provoking...

    Thank you for your entry in the Internet Connection contest. I enjoyed reading your profound and thoughtfully written poem!! You have lived through the dark realm of cyber-experience, and I thank you for sharing your wisdom with us!! Wishing you the best in all you do. Take care, and thanks again. Peace & Hugs xx Cyn


    • smonte19124 gold member
      February 28

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      I am overwhelmed by the geneorsity of your words and I thank you from the bottom of my heart. Even more thank you for the honor of receiving the Gold it means a lot to me. God Bless You my Friend, Jo-Ann

      • Cynthia Gaines gold member
        February 28
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        You're very welcome!!

        Your poem is worthy of more than gold Your masterpiece's "Internet Connection Infection" message rings crytal clear. Thank you for sharing your muse's wisdom with all of us!! Peace always, xx Cyn xx


  • Tqop
    February 22
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    Interesting poem.
    The ending was true.


    • smonte19124 gold member
      February 28
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      Thank you so very much for taking the time to stop by and comment. God Bless, Jo-Ann

    • smonte19124 gold member
      February 22
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      Thank you so very much my friend for taking the time to read and for leaving the kindness of your words. God Bless, Jo-Ann


  • BehindTheShadow
    February 21
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    I loved this take on the prompt. Great job!


    • smonte19124 gold member
      February 21
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      Thank you so very much for taking the time to read and leaving the kindness of your words. God Bless, Jo-ann

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