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Glanconer

Extreme erotic touches
  Streaming down into the hallow fields of tranquil


Fatal revelations of shadows
rushing in and out of those soulless eyes


While luminous blue auric rainbows
bestow stonily at your feet



Shimmer my Glanconer
Shine as the sun does against this dusted earth



Lead me into the woodlands





[of were you once left me before]






Take those oracles of pure lust and passion
out of your breast
and consume me in the cracked scales of your skin
Mildew raindrops pour from your lips
Glistening in the twilight if the sky
{Be careful though...






Your not the only one with power}








A F-A-E-R-Y of pure lust
A F-A-E-R-Y of pure hate
To walk beside you through the treacherous nights forever
or to leave me in pain and despair

The Glanconer breaks hearts
_ leaving nasty bites _

{The pain and joy he gives...
is better than life can grant you}























Sleep my Glanconer

While I rest under your wings of sorrow.

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  • Samantha Marie
    February 21

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    Wow. This is just.... WOW.
    It's left me speechless, I can't even describe how brilliant this poem is. AMAZING job!
    Thank you for entering, and Good luck!


  • A. Rose
    February 21

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    Wow, this was amazing. I really liked your choice of words and structure for this. Thanks for entering the contest!


  • Boxingboy
    February 21
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    O.O WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    okay seriously AWESOME

    PPUBLISH PUBLISH PUBLISH


  • demonic66
    February 21
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    wow that beautiful

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