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A tick of the clock
Midnight chimes the halls

Falling droplet of dew
Ripples the water

Time slowly rolls away
As the flower blooms

Quickly time flys past
As the invisible second hand

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  • Zane Rose
    February 24

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    This is very nice nee-chan. I love it! I love how the first and last line tie the entire thing together. Great job! (^.^)b
    Love ya!
    ~AEO~


  • Pandorea
    February 21
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    pretty. like like the way you string your words together.


    • RunningFromReality
      February 21
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      aw. thanks. lol i just had a sudden brain blast of words and had to get them down, ya know?