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[ you make me wake up ]

you make me wake up
you force me to breathe to live
I close my eyes
the wanting for eternal sleep is un-nerving
and you jolt me awake
you kiss me
and revive me of the life I once held to dear
the love I had let go
the darkness arouses me
you force me to open my eyes
to the bright wonderful world you have created
for me
I look at you I don't remember who you are
I forgot my true love
you kiss me, touch my skin
I breathe
I take in your scent
the color of your eyes
the feeling of you against me
I remember you
but when the time comes for us to reunite
tell me
will you remember me?


         

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This is for the amazing guy, you know who you are, that made my life so amazing. And I can't wait to be with him again because....... well you figure it out.

Is this true love?

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  • Anthony15
    February 23
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    Omg sarah I feel the raw emotion of this and i wish sometimes it was me you were wrighting about


  • Commonsuicide
    February 21
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    Good

    very very good