I tremble in the rich text of your beauty, the depth of your sensual neo soul,
slams poetry beat deep within me, layer by layer the heat of your words
slowly disrobe my inhibitions, until I lay stimulated...breathless...naked.
A contest entry
- Can You Make Me Say Damn! by theredcatjazzoflove.
1500 points, ended February 22, 2009, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - xx Short Poems. May The Best ShortWrite Win! xx by xxRainbowDawnxx.
700 points, ended March 31, 2009, 103 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Three Lines Of Wonder by poets whisper.
700 points, ended November 4, 2009, 101 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Beautifully wrote. Small writing, but it's alright I enlarged it XD.
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Damn, hon this is beautiful, it feels like silk rubbing on flesh. You always do well with these.
All the best
Emma
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very well written here. The emotions roll freely through your fingers and it shows through in this piece.
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Hot Damn
Damn! there I said it....you rocked this requirement and gave us all an eye full of passion...very sexy.........Novy
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Get down...on it sis
I love this!!!!
Good luck and thanks for sharing
QuietStorm
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Whoohoo, cheers sis, always a pleasure to have you comment
~sugar~
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Oh my god this is amazing hun
What words penned
Beautiful
Best wishes and indeed DAMN !
Love Julie x
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Thank you Julie for your fab comment
~sugar~
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DAMN, BABY- I THINK YOU'VE DONE IT!
You made me say DAMN more than once and I BELIEVE that this one will make JU JU say DAMN too. Now cover up before you catch your death of cold - or invite me in to admire your sweet and sensual nude body and to keep you warm.
Peace & Love!
Earl.
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LMAO! You're invited NAUGHTY!
Come keep me warm baby.
Thank you sweet for your wonderful comment, as always such
a pleasure to read, the content making me smile.
Love you Chelle xxx
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Woohoo!
She's having fun now! Doing what she loves best, writing her sensual erotica.
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Cheers hon, so glad you enjoyed, a pleasure as always to have you stop by
Love ~sweetness~ xxx
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YOU'RE UNDER ARREST!
Another cold shower is in the offing. If you were my neighbor, I would never be home. Nice Job. I would give you a hug, but I might be embarrassed... LoL, Howard
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Ya got handcuffs Cheers Howard, enjoy ya shower, love ya comment, I didn't think that was too bad. LOL
~sugar~
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I love this one, sugar you did wonderful, and you know she liked it. Best of luck..
by the way..
now take those three lines
and build on it.
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Thank you Riftkin....I'm thinking on it
Glad you enjoyed
~sugar~
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damn! this is tha baddest hell i am so grinning sugar flower this is the best scent of poetry roses i recieved in a good while hon awww i love you priceless doll
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LMAO! Love you too hon ...been awhile since I have done writing like this
glad you enjoyed, thank you so much for your wicked comment Whoohoo
~sugar~
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