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Untitled Flesh

Untitled Flesh

By: The Red Cat Jazz of Love

 

 

I walk alone the tracks of emotions Jehovah God,

and out the clear blue of the things I carry

around in my purse of guilt, pride and agony,

tell me my father.

 

Where is the nearest sheol

where sinners dump they emotions

so I can haul off all my past debts

while I pen my new mission walking out of

the thrift sale of Satan’s world?

 

To many I am a learning woman

but at heart I have the little girl feel

who needs your spiritual arms around me

patting my back letting me know in tar storms

I sometimes may will fall completely short here and there,

but you always lend me your hand helping me

in my dark despair.

 

If by your will, put me back to spiritual perfection

so I can look the demon in reply who constantly

taunts you through constantly putting me in

a casket to watch the daughter who loves you

with her complete soul squirm.

 

My tears are speeding down the busy traffic

of my cheeks because I happen to know,

that I can’t even breathe a day of the week

with out talking to you asking you for your

opinions on my life that has made a strife diary

that know the powers.

 

I have disconnected my service to the worldly

because I don’t cherish the earthly feel

with the high life bills.

Now that I walk half the path your son Jesus Christ did

most look at me like I am completely ill.

When actually I am not because he was bold

just like me and was able to look the bastard of the first lie

told and tell him it is written.

 

I will not bow down and help this world of his

because he has took the power of everlasting life

from all your kids.

 

Jehovah God, right now my title is deedless to Satan

please give my flesh a title because I want to be

the perfect daughter idol.

 

Oh God, you have blessed me with your purity

to love what I do know,

and what I am still learning to know

that is unknown.

 

Oh God, you’ve blessed me with the purity of love,

but don’t leave me wandering further more

on this tragedy of guilt unknown.

 

 

© Julia L. Clark Registration Number TXu-331-190, All rights reserved

 

 

 

 

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Untitled Flesh

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services of my father
Jehovah God

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Untitled Flesh The Writing Works of My Father. I Would Appreciate If You Wouldn't Be Bias Towards Me And My Father As I Wouldn't Be Bias Between You And Yours. Don't Steal My Images As Well Either .

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  • takingthedog
    March 9, 2009
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    I'll come back; want to write something


  • Thoughts-of-Soloman
    March 7, 2009

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    The thoughts this brings to me:

    We all have a real place and name in Truth,
    yet we are tested in the 'world of separation' as we come to realise this through the knowledge of our selves and a love to return to our 'original condition' of closeness.

    A great write and congratulations on your Gold.

    Sol


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    March 7, 2009

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    Well I can see the little girl roaming in the dust and finding her way to reach home..well done indeed...

  • Dobar Dan
    March 3, 2009

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    What Can I Say ? ? ? ?

    I read all the other comments and I second each motion - you have crafted a maserpiece here - no doubt about it - Bless God - Joe - hugs --------------------------------------------------------------------------- cheers


  • poeticweaver gold member
    February 22, 2009

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    I find myself feeling as a boy sometimes, I guess that's why I'm so Mushy eh. Your heart and soul is put into this one, and you the river of words here runs deep as oceans. Anyone who can admit they are flawed, and push forward in longing the light, I admire. Thanks for sharing, peace in your pathway sweet one.


  • BonnieQ silver member
    February 22, 2009

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    From Your Pen to God's Ears

    This is music to God's ears, Julia; for it reflects the heart of one striving to attain our Saviour's perfection and, if it could not be done, He would not have instructed that we do so. Even more, you point out that the only way to achieve the goal is to turn away from this temporary world of glitz and glamour that clamours for our souls. No way will I give Satan even an inch and, I suspect, neither will you. Beautifully rendered and surely a winner, especially in God's eyes.

    Luv & hugs, BonnieQ


  • Rainbow7
    February 21, 2009
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    INSPIRING!
    HOW VERY INSPIRING!
    You're great, love!


  • dustytiger
    February 21, 2009

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    i really loved what you have done with the prompt, it's a lot more religious then what i usually read, but i really, really enjoy it, you made me feel your faith as i was reading this, and made me think of a lot of my friends who are of various religious beliefs (unlike myself) great poem, the way you aligned it really made it stand out for me, i loved it so much, great, work, best of luck in the contest


    • theredcatjazzoflove
      February 21, 2009
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      thank you so much for stopping in and thanks for leaving behind your opinion
      it is greatly appreciated


  • Swangrnv gold member
    February 21, 2009

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    WOW

    No bias necessary to say the obvious, this was powerful, deeply moving, and sad in places, overall it was outstanding!


    • theredcatjazzoflove
      February 21, 2009
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      hi mr celeb. hello how are you you off the high horse red carpet you finally came to see about my crazy a** cracking up thanks kh yea i try


  • hotchocolate gold member
    February 21, 2009

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    This was deeplky written here and I'm glad I had the pleasure reading Sis!


    Where is the nearest sheol
    where sinners dump they emotions
    so I can haul off all my past debts
    while I pen my new mission walking out of
    the thrift sale of Satan’s world?


    When actually I am not because he was bold
    just like me and was able to look the bastard of the first lie
    told and tell him it is written.
    I will not bow down and help this world of his
    because he has took the power of everlasting life
    from all your kids.


    • theredcatjazzoflove
      February 21, 2009
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      my twin in thoughts we're going to be each other ghost writer one day
      and it would be a honor completely on my behalf so when i have a stroke at thoughts lol i will have my peeps contact you becuase we think alike lol totally i like those same points dear

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