Purple persuasions
fused in mixed metaphors
of aqua boggie nights
swave to hypnotic beats
driven by melodic ecstasy
as cats and beatnicks
brew insolvent tunes in
the insanity of cerebral paradise
mellon moons strike a trance
as rotound ass booties
blast with hips swaying
swanky dudes bleed
intoxicated rhythms of hysteria
round wanton waist wenches
euphoric echoes sound
melancholy bliss in a sea
of vibrating jubilance
as heavens juke joint
erupts in rapturous splendor
to a psychedelic odyssey of elegance
Author notes
Picture Option #2
http://www.metalmanfineart.com/Mystical%20Elements
A contest entry
- Picture Option Prompt by penman.
2250 points, ended February 25, 2009, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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To a psychedelic odyssey of elegance.....The best line!
Good write my friend good write!
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I love the 70s play on words you use in this piece. Really love the flow and the images. My fave line is:
mellon moons strike a trance
as rotound ass booties
blast with hips swaying
Great verse. The whole piece was really vibing, man. - cgirl0410
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hey hey hey my type of shakey leg i so love this here groove of course you know that this was a defo a juke joint concert
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awesome arrangement
of heavenly harmonics, i loved it!!
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HeeHee!! I like this piece penned here! Good luck in the contest hon
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