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Some One

I need someone to comfort me
To hold me through the pain
I need someone to talk to me
To keep the blood running through my veins

I cry at night, hoping you'll come
Though I know you never will
I just want some one to be there for me
My heart has just been killed

I need somebody in my life
Who I can call my own
I need someone to love and hold
Some one to keep  me sewn

I need some one to talk to me
I thank the few who do
I need some one to help me now
Some one to guide me through

I'm all alone and I hate it this way
I need somebody to love
I'm so lonely and I don't want to be
Some one please help me rise above.

For help is what I'm asking you
You've left me alone for so long,
For once just let my words be right
I'm so used to being wrong

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Written February 20th, 2004

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  • November 8, 2004
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    Justin...
    I miss you so...

  • XxIHateYouTooxX
    March 4, 2004
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    wow aleia this is really good. i know how you feel too...been there before :/

    x Jill x

  • PixieDustins
    February 23, 2004
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    This is a really cute poem! You need to enter it in the contest called " Fall in love" it has huge potential!


  • February 23, 2004
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    Yay! Thats really good Aleia. I love the rhyming! If this is refering to a guy dont worry about it and if it's not you know I'm always here no matter what the circumstances! Love you dearly!

    Kylie