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when were old

you said that your gonna love me forever
and wan tto be with me till the end
but is that true?

how about when I'm old and frail?
when i can hardly walk down the trail
will you still love me when my hair greys
when I'm not as active and fast as always?

but will you hold my hand as we walk?
just to help me out
and will you make jokes
about your balding head
to make me feel better and laugh?

and instead of a jog could you
sit with me and watch a movie?
letting me rest my head on your chest
like the first time we met?

would you still love me with my walker?
and help up the steps?
or will we both fall if you do?
will you still look at me the same
with all the wrinkles on my face?

and bare with my slow steps?
will you tell me you love me
and kiss me on the cheek
making me feel again seventeen?

now i hope you help me when the time comes,
but theres one more question i will ask,
will you let me fall asleep im your ams,
and die while you hold me?

what did you think overall?is there anything that i should work on for my future poems?

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