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~21 February, 2009

 

stairwells and doors

each passage, harlequin floors-

followed bogey; pooka

runs from hot pursuit

in restricted area breathing.

 

empty shells echo,

the unaccepted answers

to outwit, outrun

searching for escape-

more so, searching for

dodge and cover

 

to the roof...

 

knocking with ka-pow and blam

my shadow-self attempt

to correct fool's misunderstanding-

stinging shame into bone crushing

force so disrupt, cowed corrupt

for blamed game ideology.

 

 

so much for the super-me...

Author notes

-Just a weird dream.- (didn't realize just how hellacious my left hook was until I punched myself. Damn!)

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  • Draig aine gold member
    February 21
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    love it my friend

    packs a punch


  • maralisa silver member
    February 21

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    haha a great write thank you for sharing maralisa


  • Griswold gold member
    February 21

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    You gotta watch out for those left hooks, they catch ya unawares all the time. But then the roundhouse right can hurt ya too. I would suggest restraints while you sleep maybe? Funny I been dreaming of wood floors myself lately, prolly because I just laid 800sq ft of it.


    • Hetha gold member
      February 21
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      My husband hates my running, flying,(kicking) dreams. I've dreamt of wood floors too, and tile and concrete. Ugh! I totally hear ya there. Glad you got a decent laugh out of it.