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Disease

What am I,
silent as the wind,
mood blue as the sky.
Feels like fate
this HIV.
Silent, dreadful torture
is my life's destiny.

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  • Klayer
    March 2

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    Short, but bitterly sweet if that makes sence? Its so packed with emotion it needs no futher lengh. Beautiful.


  • XRainbowliciousX
    February 22
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    yeah..


  • XRainbowliciousX
    February 21

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    I really liked this..but if i wouldn't have known what it was supposed to be about i wouldn't have understood it was about hiv/aids...that may be something to fix.