he put's on his sweater,
claims he's never looked better,
than today.
and he slips on his shoes,
to go get the paper,
to read all the bad news
and his house is so lonely
nothings quite homey
except for the fire place
But that look on his face
is starting to fold
but that look on his face
is turning into something old
because none of these tears,
make up for these years.
no son, no daughter, no beautiful wife
He's lived through everyone else’s life
and this is how its should never go
where nobody
nobody knows
nobody knows
nobody knows
you at all
it's around four o' clock
there isn't any talk
going on at the dinner table
then the telephone rings
and the telemarketer sings
about fancy new things
he doesn’t need
But he doesn’t care
because there's somebody there
but he doesn’t care
because he's in such despair
because none of these tears,
make up for these years.
no son, no daughter,no beautiful wife
He's lived through everyone else’s life
and this is how its should never go
where nobody
nobody knows
nobody knows
nobody knows
you at all
The operator speaks
in words that are bleak
knowing the conversation is over
So he crawls into bed
because there’s no words to be said
anymore
The next days the same
he can't stand the man he became
and he puts on his sweater,
claims he's never looked more bitter,
than today.
metaphors.flow.love.
Comments
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excellent
this is brilliant, great write
and the structures great too
either really well thought out or it was pure flow


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thank you so much
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