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Eternal Flame

A smile
A look
an innocent gesture
nothing can stop it
anything can start a new spark
or rather spark a flame
a flame one would thought would burn forever
how stupid a student am I.
F in love
F in looks
F in everything
I shouldn't have believed myself
Because your love will fade
the flame will run out of fuel
YOUR flame
MY flame burns on the eternal fuel of TRUE love.
A fuel rarely discovered
and even rarely used.

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Written February 23rd, 2004

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  • shortcake
    March 10, 2004
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    I really liked the way you expressed yourself. I really agree about the true love statement. Very deep, but wonderful. Thanks for sharing it.

  • GanjaGodess
    March 1, 2004
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    aha! yes, its coming together now.sorry you think your ugly.

  • GanjaGodess
    February 25, 2004
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    Fin love/Fin looks/Fin evertthing is rather confusing. i think you mean to say fucking. or maybe you have a fetish for finland.


  • February 24, 2004
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    very purtyful..i like the feelings u showed. beautiful.
    ***et3rnaldarkn3ss***

  • Darkest Shadows
    February 23, 2004
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    dude.... i like it... good write keep up the amazing writes***
    ~stef

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