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Come and See

Come and See
the bland person that is
The great failure
Tbe grand-fuck up.
The one and only
For the price of your sanity
you can see this sad soul
longing to find his way
pushing you away
pushing
pulling
ultimately
failing

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Written February 23rd, 2004

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  • February 24, 2004
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    Awesome job...!!!!i loved the ending.."pulling, ultimately...Falling..." great job.
    ***et3rnaldarkn3ss***